Hello! I am wondering what you would do with this situation. We moved into our home about 7 months ago. The people behind us keep a dog outside. They seem to be without much money. I am concerned because it has fallen rather cold where we live and I don’t think the dog has any bedding in its house. I went today and purchased some straw to give them. I have never really spoken to them, but I would feel better if I knew the dog has some warmth this winter. Should I just take it over & leave by the doghouse? Should I knock on the door and say I wanted to pass it on to them for their dog? I would hate to see it wasted (used for decoration, sit outside all winter, etc). I don’t care honestly if they are offended…I would rather the dog be warm than worry about someone being upset with me. How would you go about this? Thanks!

Be direct, If they love their dog they will appriciate it. If they are neglectful, maybe they’ll be less so ,knowing you are keeping an eye out.

I really want the main character, Katie (12) who is blind to have a really well structured personality. Maybe that doesn’t show here, but I’ve been posting a couple snippets from the story so far, so hopefully I am shaping her into a fun, independent 12 year old =)

Grammar? Is it interesting enough for what it is? Someone on here brought my attention to omniscient third person, which I want to write in, but am confused about where my boundaries go. Help with that?

Any other comments? Thanks in advance!

She inhaled deeply and clambered up the stairs and into her room. Listen to music. Great idea. If only she knew where her iPod was. Katie dropped to the ground on her hands and knees and started searching. If she didn’t find it, at least looking for it would waste some time. Her hand crawled in all different directions, skimming over the floor, under the bed, desk, and dresser. She slithered into the lounge room and checked under all the chairs. Finally, she stood up and dug her hand under the pillows, feeling every crevice and corner, but she was nothing but disappointed. She ran her hands over and under the sheets of her bed, and tops of the desk and dresser, but still no iPod. “Mom?” She hollered. “Can you help me look for my iPod?” Still no response. She must be out food shopping or something.
Well, she could check listening to music off for list of things she can’t do. Katie collapsed onto the cool, wood floor of her bedroom. She lay there in annoyance, arms crossed over her chest. Puck trotted over to her and licked her face. “Hehe, stop Puck!” She cried and hugged her dog. “Puck,” She said, bolting up, “Could you help me find my ipod?” She listened for a response, but only heard her dog’s heavy breathing. “Thought not,” She mumbled and sank back down. The boredom was eating away at her. “Okay,” She said aloud, “I’ll make my own music. Help me sing Puck.” The dog bumped his head into her shoulder as Katie hollered a very out of tune version of Love Story. “WE WERE BOTH YOUNG WHEN I FIRST SAW YOU…” Katie chanted. “I CLOSED MY EYES, AND THE FLASHBACK STARTS I’M STANDING THERE. ON A BALCONY OF SUMMER AIR.”
She sang each verse with the loudest tone she could muster up, feeling free and giggly.

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1. It should have a blank space between paragraphs to make it easier to read without Tabs.

2. As I review this again, I am uncertain if it has paragraphs. It needs to be edited for grammar.

3. Capital letters are for chat rooms. They are not grammatically correct.

My chihuahua was sleeping in bed with me like he usually does and when we awoke to go downstairs to get breakfast, I noticed he has a fairly large red mark on his neck. It’s almost like someone ripped out the hair on his neck! It’s going in an up and down line pattern. He’s acting normal though besides the fact that he’s shaking a little more than usual (or it could just be my imagination). I have no idea what it could be since we were lying in bed the whole time. I wonder if this is serious enough to go to the vet. It’s too early now though and I have no means of transportation at the moment. So does anyone know what I can do? He’s sleeping on my lap right now and seems fine. I’m guessing it could be because he somehow ate my corn dog earlier before bed and now I’m freaking out that he may have ate the stick too… I don’t think he’s that dumb though…

Take him to the vet now, could be ringworm vet can detect it from IV light, and have skin scrap exam
Sounds like he has been scratching badly on that area

Please, Justin Bieber freaks, don’t kill me for this. If you can’t take it sportingly, then no need to answer.

How to Take Care of your Pet Justin Bieber

Justin Biebers are a new type of pet. Having a Justin Bieber can be very rewarding. But looking after it is also hard. So, I made this to help you all who will like to keep a Justin Bieber.

A Justin Bieber is an ape-like genderless animal first found in Canada. Justin Biebers are very intelligent compared to other animals; some scientist have calculated them to have the I.Q of a 6 years old child! However, because they are so smart, Justin Bieber will cause a lot of chaos. Justin Biebers also like to sing in their own ape language, so before buying make sure you have these things.

Justin Biebers prefer to sleep in beds, but you can make them sleep anywhere, even on the floor! Before buying a Justin Bieber, make sure you buy a whip, a statue of Selena Gomez and a ball gag. Justin Biebers are very tough, therefore if they behave badly, you must whip them. Even animal lovers agree with this technique so no need to think you are being cruel. Since Justin Biebers ruin the house by singing (mating call) a ball gag can help them shut up. Justin Biebers also need to be potty trained; most people give them dog litter boxes, but some Justin Biebers can also use the commode! Justin Biebers behave naughtily when left alone, so a statue of Selena Gomez can make sure your house is clean. Justin Biebers also have a language resembling humans and have been known to say simple phrases like ‘LET ME OUT’ or ‘HELP’!!! Justin Biebers need to be taken out for walks or else they sing more.

A pet Justin Bieber may seem like a lot of trouble. But if trained properly, a Justin Bieber can be a blessing to your family. If you want to buy a Justin Bieber, go to your local pet shop , and you will find them. Some Justin Biebers are kept in cages, and some in glass domes. A Justin Bieber costs 10,000 Tk ONLY! So do your family a favour and get yourself a Justin Bieber NOW!

Justin Bieber is the pet for every race!

Quite nice. And quite true.

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